Okay, seriously, what in the world is this below?
I have deleted my earlier rant pointed at BBC’s Big ‘suprise-horror-shock’ Findings because there was no way i could then move from that to this absolute rubbish; Seriously. Robert. I am sure you are a great guy and some more but come’on, construct a proper sentence. just one, that is a job after all, no?
Fagil Mandy on the catwalk
You would think he has been at it for years. He had everything; the demeanor, the poise and that stare – the kind he normally gave naughty children during his teaching days – Fagil Mandy was the personification of coolness.
The former Minister of Education was one of the models who showcased designs from the Nigerian inspired E-Creations fashion house. But he was not the only “surprise model” the organisers had in store for us; Kora Award nominee Suzan Kerunen took to the runway with the slickness of a pro-model and as for the singer Sarah Zawedde, apart from the plastic smile and the occasional side-wiggle here and there, it was a lackluster “model debut.”
couldn’t read on…..
See Robert, I once worked where you work, and I know most of the headaches you must deal with to go through one story. Plus; I was terrible at my job and this probably is why I took the break, so am not playing the -AM Better than you- Game. But seriously, dude, you took over from Serugo. YOU CAN NOT BE WRITING “…stare-the kind he used to give to naughty children….” wtf?
The soul of society writing (in my very unschooled/untrained opinion) is the writing itself. Fact is half your readers -(yes sweeping assumption watever)- dont really care about your covered event because if they did they would have attended….and the other half who do care to know, were there, with you, so when you suggest to them that “Mr. Mandy, the former eduction mister had a Teacher-Naughty student Stare going on while on the cat walk” am sure they too go; wtf? whats this guy going on about